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May 21, 2023Liked by Camilla Sanderson

I really enjoyed the ER room scene. The tension was so well described, I couldn't read through it fast enough. I love this line "I’m impatient by nature, but I’ve never before experienced such pervasive angst while waiting. Jamie seems too weak to put up any fight." It exemplifies the tension.

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Thanks so much for reading and giving Gateless feedback Deborah! Much appreciated✨🌟💖🙏🕊️😘

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